Apparently my article had “no flow.” Oh, I’m sorry, should I have included more obvious transition words and phrases, like a high school essay? My bad.
I don’t think I’ll be asking my rejectors for feedback, anymore.
Then Desmond was upset and fighting with his sister, and then he was fighting with us and saying hurtful things that I have no idea where he would have heard before.
It’s just been an all around shitty day. And it’s not getting better, it’s just getting worse.
I feel out of control.